Finding and solving that formatting problem was a big deal. Ultimately, though, the format of the script, and who can read the script, are secondary to actually writing the script.
So, that is what I have gotten down to this evening. Some more actual writing. I think I may have had a little too much fun in a part of the story where it isn't really supposed to be fun. However, I think if I let it go too dark it will certainly come off as whiny.
I mean, how bad can it be when the character's only serious problem is that he has no serious problems to face. If I let him mope too hard on that it will sound like rock stars complaining about being famous.
I think there will be some actual conflict in the next issue. Kinetic has to pay his dues and put in his work before he can start just having adventures.