Open Studio 7/23/2012 Issue #6 pages 9 - 13

What is the Open Studio?

Page 9. Good. real good.

Page 10. Yep, still good.

Page 11. Those 3 across the top work well.

Page 12. Hourglass is a nut! I wasn't thinking of her being all sexy like that, but it does build tension. Just because the reader must be wondering what is up with her.

-josh

just the way I wanted it to read dude-she's restless, stretching etc.  a nut!

-kav

Page 13. This page is just great. I love it.