Open Studio 7/6/2012 Issue 3 cover pencils

What is the Open Studio?

Kav has posted his latest pencils for the cover to Rapid City #3.

Kav, Flamethrower looks bad-ass. Like she should. Hourglass looks a little too smiley. Maybe turn up the spooky a little bit on her. AnneMarie looks ok. I feel like she is showing too much to be taken seriously. Maybe if her shirt was more... modest. You know, if it covered a little more... I feel like I could take her seriously as a character. She has to project that she can hold her own among these other powerful women, and "I'M CUTE!" just won't cut it.

Also, I feel like these same images could be crammed a little more tightly together. Maybe if AnneMarie was larger it would take up some of the undeveloped real estate.

-Josh

gotcha.  Good calls.  PS I'm using the proper size bluline cover boards now thanks to Micah. AM I can put whatever clothes on her you want.  here she has tights and a longsleeve ribbed undershirt rolled up at elbows.  PS kudos to you for finding and picking that flamethrower image-thats the hard part.  All I did was draw it.  PS RC 5 is done (except for cover)

-kav

I like her like this. Slightly larger, and in the ribbed shirt. I think this looks like a good cover, man. Get to it! As you do this cover, though, take a look back at the colors on 1 and 2. Fill the cover with stuff, capes, flames, people... but but not with ink. Leave Micah plenty of space to splash colors around.

Issue 5 is done. Wow! I owe you a ton of money!

-Josh

no rush on payment dude.

-kav