Kav has posted his latest pencils for the cover to Rapid City #3.
Kav, Flamethrower looks bad-ass. Like she should. Hourglass looks a little too smiley. Maybe turn up the spooky a little bit on her. AnneMarie looks ok. I feel like she is showing too much to be taken seriously. Maybe if her shirt was more... modest. You know, if it covered a little more... I feel like I could take her seriously as a character. She has to project that she can hold her own among these other powerful women, and "I'M CUTE!" just won't cut it.
Also, I feel like these same images could be crammed a little more tightly together. Maybe if AnneMarie was larger it would take up some of the undeveloped real estate.
gotcha. Good calls. PS I'm using the proper size bluline cover boards now thanks to Micah. AM I can put whatever clothes on her you want. here she has tights and a longsleeve ribbed undershirt rolled up at elbows. PS kudos to you for finding and picking that flamethrower image-thats the hard part. All I did was draw it. PS RC 5 is done (except for cover)
I like her like this. Slightly larger, and in the ribbed shirt. I think this looks like a good cover, man. Get to it! As you do this cover, though, take a look back at the colors on 1 and 2. Fill the cover with stuff, capes, flames, people... but but not with ink. Leave Micah plenty of space to splash colors around.
Issue 5 is done. Wow! I owe you a ton of money!
no rush on payment dude.