Issue 2 is getting ready to the printer, but I forgot to write that "last issue..." blurb. So here goes.
"Last issue... Brian, a young man who
Frustrated with his...
Taking the name Kinetic, a young man...
No, I should make it past tense
Last issue... Brian was frustrated... (too passive)
Brian struggled to start a life as a superhero, ultimately choosing the name "Kinetic". (that is better) Meanwhile, Law enforcement agents froze Maxwell Murder's bank accounts, forcing him into ( into what? desperation?)
Meanwhile, frozen bank accounts force Maxwell Murder into a corner. (nope. Not right.)
Meanwhile, frozen bank accounts leave Maxwell Murder in a desperate situation. (Ok, I think that works. Now let's put them together.)
Brian struggled to start a life as a superhero, ultimately choosing the name "Kinetic". Meanwhile, frozen bank accounts leave Maxwell Murder in a desperate situation.
I think that'll do it. -Josh
Brian won his first superhero bout-with himself-by choosing his name 'Kinetic'. Maxwell Murder, on the other hand, lost his bout with an ATM as he learned his account had been frozen...making the killer desperate....