Issue #10

The script for the tenth issue of the superhero comic book, Rapid City, has now been posted.

Panel 2. Sidekick on the ground. He has knocked over one of those black waste barrels and several pump hoses have come out of their cradles. He is gesturing to one of the hoses, or holding one up, as an example,

SIDEKICK

Careful? Doesn't look like you're too...

Panel 3. Kinetic has grabbed Sidekick by his jacket and is swinging him in a high arc.

SIDEKICK

careful!

Panel 4. Kinetic completes the high arc by slamming Sidekick hard into the ground. Monkey is leaping clear of the impact and bits of gravel are spraying up.

Panel 5. Kinetic gripping his bandaged abdomen in pain and grimacing. Sidekick is climbing to his feet again

KINETIC

Damn.

SIDEKICK

What was the point of.... Oh!

SIDEKICK

Are you ok?

Panel 5. Shot of Monkey looking over at the slightly larger crowd.

MONKEY

Sidekick, this isn't working.

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Issue #4

This is the script for the fourth issue of my superhero comic book, Rapid City. Read and discuss it here.

Panel 2 Closer on them as they talk.

KINETIC

What do you do if nothing happens?

MONKEY

Nothing.

Panel 3 Close enough to show just them, not much of the surrounding. It is clear, though, that they are navigating very uneven footing.

KINETIC

I mean, what if you are out doing this...and just NOTHING happens. What do you do?

MONKEY

I know. And I am telling you. If nothing happens you just do nothing.

In this issue, Kinetic commits himself to living the superhero life that he has been striving for.