Issue 20

The script for the twentieth issue of my superhero comic book, Rapid City, has now been posted.

This issue is completely silent and marks the start of a dark new chapter of Rapid City.

Page 15 Panel 1. Close on KINETIC touching and testing the cuffs. The WOMAN'S wrist is red and scraped.

Panel 2. Shot of the broken-out window. The BAD GUY is just starting to climb up through it, back in to the house.

Panel 3. The WOMAN speaking to KINETIC and touching her very pregnant belly.

Panel 4. Still speaking to KINETIC, she points toward the open door.

Panel 5. The WOMAN is still pointing, but now she is actually looking where she is pointing and her eyes are wide with fear.

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Issue #8

The script for the eighth issue of the superhero comic book, Rapid City, has now been posted. Read and discuss it here.

Panel 5 Hourglass is now close to Kinetic and Max. Kinetic is, once again, making it to his feet by stepping away from Max who had been looming over him. Kinetic's gut is bleeding all over.


Can't hold on.


Don't. I can do this. Just hold on.

Panel 6 Tight shot of Hourglass and Max face to face. They are both in profile. He is enraged, and still frozen in place. She is looking bad. Blood and tears on her face. But, also, clarity.

Panel 7 Similar to panel six, but turned so that we can see it more from Max's POV. She is looking clear and focused, but she is also tense with effort. Emphasis on open bullet hole.


Who are you? Why did you kill me?