The script for the eighth issue of the superhero comic book, Rapid City, has now been posted. Read and discuss it here.
Can't hold on.
Don't. I can do this. Just hold on.
Panel 6 Tight shot of Hourglass and Max face to face. They are both in profile. He is enraged, and still frozen in place. She is looking bad. Blood and tears on her face. But, also, clarity.
Panel 7 Similar to panel six, but turned so that we can see it more from Max's POV. She is looking clear and focused, but she is also tense with effort. Emphasis on open bullet hole.
Who are you? Why did you kill me?